Narrative Paragraphs: Playing fast and loose
A Different Beast
Narrative paragraphs are not like paragraphs in an expository essay. They don't require a topic sentence followed by a sentence or two of supporting evidence, followed by an integrated quotation, followed by analysis, followed by a transition. That approach is actually pretty formulaic and lame, even in an expository essay, but it is particularly out of place in a narrative.
So, what are they for?
Like any paragraph, narrative 'graphs are for grouping similar bits of information. In a narrative, though, I like to think of them as camera angles. I think to myself, if this were a movie, when would the camera shift to something new? Pay attention next time you watch a movie or TV show. The cuts between camera angles establish a rhythm, as they direct viewers attention. Your paragraphs should do the same thing.
How?
Easy. Think about what's being shown. When that switches, switch paragraphs. Some of my paragraphs are only a few words in length. This can add emphasis to an idea or image. The rhythm you establish is your own, but when I see only two paragraphs on a page, I figure I'm either dealing with an author from the 19th Century, or a student who hasn't established a confident sense of rhythm.
Check out the sample below. Notice when I make a new paragraph. It's not magic, and once you start to play with it, it's actually quite freeing. Give it a shot!
Check out the sample below. Notice when I make a new paragraph. It's not magic, and once you start to play with it, it's actually quite freeing. Give it a shot!